User blog:Lovedogskk/Warrior Cats

Warrior Cats
I'm thinking of making a song about a warrior cat, and this is what I have so far:

GingerLeaf, she is bound to the ground at she can't get out

She cries an she pleas but she can't get free,

Can anyone help her see? See, see, see.

She- purrs with every word of comfort, but it's hard cause she's

bound to the ground and she can't get out, she cries and she pleas but she can't get free,

cut loose - stay calm - they'll help you, be fre-e-e-e-e-e-e-e-e-e-e-e-e-e-e-e-e

What do you think? Should I finish it?