Thread:Katy5233/@comment-31254456-20170219000056

Hey guys, check out this story I wrote

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The Tale of the Legendary Rhino                           Once upon a time, not to long ago, there lived the legendary rhino, This rhino was legendary and great because he had a golden horn that could turn anything into gold! Many people had gone out to search for the rhino to become rich and important but they did not succeed and for trying to harm the rhino they suffered a pitiful death. One day two girls named Jessie and Sage who were sisters, They loved adventure, animals and wanted to help the rhino so they decided to go out and search for the rhino to bring him home and keep him safe and sound. Sage and Jessie had to pack a lot of food and water, for the journey was long and dry. Once they were sure they had packed everything Sage said they had forgotten about their animal talker. The animal talker allowed them to talk to animals and understand their feelings. They used it alot when they went on adventures. So Jessie ran inside their little hut where they lived and got the animal talker. Once they were positive    they had everything they left for the journey to find legendary rhino. Jessie and Sage had walked for 2 days and had not rested once. For you can only guess how they were not tired. After 10  miles they saw a bolder and they decided to sit down and rest by it. Then Jessie noticed something shining on the bolder. She noticed it was gold! Jessie saw the bolder moving it was a rhino with golden horn! Jessie got out the animal talker. Then Jessie said this to the rhino “Hello. We come in peace. Are you the legendary rhino?’’ The rhino said “Yes I am do you want to be friends?’’  “Sure” said Jessie. Then she let Sage talk to the rhino  “I can’t believe it I am actually meeting you !’’   “Yes it is a pleasure to meet you too .” “I have a question that maybe you can answer” said Sage “OK, What is it?” said the rhino “ Well, how did Jessie and I survive 2 days without resting?” said Sage “ Well all who want to harm me will die and all that want to help me and be friends with me will be given special powers!” Said the rhino “WOW!” Said Sage. She screamed so loud Jessie nearly jumped out of her skin  “What special powers do we get?” asked Sage  “Well first you don't need the animal talker to talk to me and second, you are immortal!” said the rhino getting excited “Wow” said Sage. Then Jessie said “ I have heard everything you guys said and I am amazed!” “Wait you get one more thing” said the rhino mysteriously  “What is it?” Sage and Jessie asked at the same time  “Well you know how you have always lived in that tiny old dusty hut?” said the rhino getting even more excited “yes” said Jessie and Sage who were getting excited too “Well now It has turned into a lovely cottage” said the rhino ‘bouncing’ up and down with excitement “WOW!” Jessie and Sage yelled with Excitement “With a rhino cave beside it” said the rhino smiling a big ,huge smile. “ Y-you mean you are coming to live with us!” said Jessie and Sage hardly daring to believe it “ It's true” said the rhino. “Well what are we waiting for?” asked Sage and Jessie together. “Let's go!” said the rhino. So Jessie and Sage rode on the rhino’s back all the way home to their new cozy cottage and they all lived...

...Happily Ever After!

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Hope you like it! 