Thread:99.3.57.188/@comment-39251536-20190620194953/@comment-39251536-20190622033145

mhm. The names sound VERY familiar. :)

Hmm, you left off where you were nervous for the mission...? Well:

I paced back and forth, waiting for the signal. Currently, I was waiting with Arrow at the villain's lair. "Ok, we're in." Brynn said through the com. I sighed in relief and smiled at Arrow, who returned the gesture. But that smile faded when we heard screaming "MAN DOWN! THEY SAW US, RETREAT!"

So then, basically you plundge into the lair to see Brynn hovering over the knocked out ____, and rush over. Then as you do the villan jumps out and grabbs ___ and Brynn and takes em' away. So, a revenge is your next move >:3

Idk, that's what I'd like! :3 Whatever you decide, I'm gonna love it! The way you word things in your books is amazing! Your a great  author!