Thread:TheRealIcestorm/@comment-38027773-20190115172906

Characters: Robert Jackson age 35, status: widower with no job. Jim Jackson: Age 17, status: Rob's son. Taro Hanamaki age 22, status: owner/creator of Fortune's Asian Buffet.

Chapter 1: Welcome to Fortune's Asian Buffet...

Jim: Hey Dad, look! This ad in the newspaper could be the answer to all our problems!

Newspaper: HELP WANTED: Fortune's Asian Buffet. Night Guards needed. Call 1-800-773-7471 today.

Rob: Oh my gosh, Jim! This just might be it! We've needed an easy job that pays well for so long! I'm gonna call right now so we don't lose this oppertunity!

Later that day...

Taro: Welcome to Fortune's Asian Buffet. How may I help you?

Rob: We're here about the Night Guard posistion in the paper.

Taro: Oh yes, of course! I remember your call now, but I'm afraid I've changed my mind about..

Rob: WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU CHANGED YOUR MIND???!!!!

Jim: Dad, calm down!

Taro: I'm sorry sir, but I don't need Night Guards now because my friends offered to help.

Rob: What friends?

Taro: Why, my Anamatronics of course!

Jim: You mean Fortune?

Taro: Yes, as well as the others.

Rob then pulls a gun out of his pocket...

Rob: You hired a bunch of nuts and bolts after two people in need of a good job call and ask for one?!

Taro: No! I hired them yesterday! The ad never got removed form the paper!

Jim: Dad! Why do you have that gun out?! Put it down!

Rob: Only if this jerk gives me what I came for!

Taro: I'm sorry sir, but I can't do....

BAM!!!!!

Taro lay motionless on the floor...

Jim: DAD HOW COULD YOU?!

Rob: ...We now can take posession of this place son...

Jim: Did you have to kill him?

Rob: We need the money son.

Jim: Can I still be a Night Guard?

Rob: Of course you can son. You can do whatever you want here now...just as soon as we find his will and come up with a good story why this place is ours...

Jim: I'm sure we'll think of something Dad.

Rob: I'm glad you agree with me son.

Chapter 2: The Will

I haven't thought of it yet... what did you think of Chapter 1? I need you to modify it and make it better... 