Board Thread:Games Tent/@comment-31322722-20170421142358/@comment-31322722-20170422214858

Marvelgirl71 wrote: Oh okay got! It!

Chapter 2: 

One day 14 year old Lily grows up and starts a bee keeping bussiness, but there is only one problem how will she get people to know about her bussiness? Lily: " How will I get people to come? Hmm... Gotta figure this out! " she thinks and thinks and thinks then finally she has an idea! Lily: " I KNOW! I could make an advertisement for my bee keeping bussiness! I will make this the best advertisement ever, just need some people to tape it!" so she looks for people to hire for her advertisement Lily: " Doesn't seem like anybody is interrested... Maybe I will make a website and say I am now hiring maybe then I will get some people hired! " so she makes a website 2 days later.... Lily: " Hmm... I'm going to check my wesbsite! " So she checks! ???: "Your hiring? I didn't know, I would like to get hired! " Lily replies: " Okay meet me at my house address is 999 " so she hires them as a camera guy and she gets 3 more to be the camera guys for her advertisement Lily: " Okay guys let's make this advertisement " she makes the advertisement 1 day later.... People: " Hmm.. I wonder where that place is! " So people check it out Lily: " Hi everybody! Wow I got a lot of customers, so you can buy honey over here from this shelf and here are the hives! They all cost $10 each! " at the end of the day she makes $100 and the bussiness is successful, one day she will have $10,000 dollars which is a long journey by time she turns 23 she will be ready to buy a house! So Sussettey do you like this? That's cute and all, but here's the thing. The book takes place in 1964, so there was no internet. I also want to include her relationship with Zach because...

IT WOULD NOT BE INTERESTING OTHERWISE.

You need to have romantic drama in there too!


 * sigh

mastery level english.